The Task:
Write a paragraph containing one fact and three fictitious elements...
The Response:
I have an older sister called Lorraine. She lives in Wapping where she has worked on the pharmacy counter at Boots for 20 years. She loves her job; she likes helping people to find the cures for their aches and pains, she likes to see people who come in regularly for repeat prescriptions and to hear about the adventures being planned by people who are coming in for travel medications. She is a tall woman, my sister, not like me at all. If you didn't know better you'd think one of us had been adopted. She's tall, comfortably built with a mess of blonde hair and one lazy eye which means that customers are never quite sure if she is talking to them or the person to their left, a trait which, thankfully, has not been inherited by her two children, my niece and nephew, Katherine and Louis.
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